0x744cdf12…9071sent to0x8d59e106…2902·#23,429,574·view on Etherscan
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Thank you for the delegate and support
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> I’ve delegated to you, so you should be able to go onchain. Though I’d still suggest getting more feedback first, because while candidates can update, once it’s a proposal you can’t change anything.
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> > Thanks a lot for the feedback 🙏🏾. I took your points to heart and have edited the prop to make it cleaner and more scannable.
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> > > Your prop has solid content, but the style makes it harder to follow. Feels like everything’s crammed together, which makes the key points less clear. I’d cut down on extra words, use shorter sentences, and break things into cleaner sections. Also, avoid screaming case in titles, it reads harsh. A cleaner structure with normal casing will make your journey and Devconnect plan stand out instead of getting buried. The goal is to make it easy for people to scan fast, see the value, and then dig in if they want.
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> > * Simplified the language and cut down extra words
> > * Broke things into clearer sections with bullet points
> > * Adjusted the title and formatting to feel less heavy
> > * Highlighted my journey and Devconnect plan more directly
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> > Here’s the updated version, would love for you (and others) to give it another look and share any further thoughts. Appreciate you helping me make this stronger.
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