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I have wanted to see a Nouns musical since my very first days connecting with the nouns community and as such, I am on board for this generally. It was my intention to come and vote 'yes' on this, because I met Max and Jeff at Nouns Town and they seem like talented, and passionate people. But if I can't bring my own experience and knowlege to my voting here then what's the point of me voting at all?
While the overall concept of this musical is appealing, I'm finding this proposal a bit light on. The song 'take my hand', is nice, but feels like a pop song and is vague on how it functions to move the plot forward at all (this is not the forum for specific feedback, but I have a lot). I'm not sure how successful it can be as the selling song for a musical. There is mention here of a 'weeklong songwriting camp', but no real detail on workshops or dramaturgy or how the actual theatre making of it all is going to be developed, which I would love to see. A musical is not a concept album. Presumably, Max has experience doing this kind development before for his 'Adam & Eve' musical, but I couldn't find much info about it and would love to read more about plans for the development process of this musical. Working on a script for months and then having a 'script doctor' edit with the writers feels like an unorthodox way to workshop a musical. I would vote yes on this if the first 120K was for workshops and development, not script writing and social media.
If this doesn't pass straight away, I would really like to see another proposal soon with more information on how you actually plan to make a musical, because I feel like this could be great! And if it does pass I would love to read more about the next steps! Good luck.